11.17 Homework

2014-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Happy Monday! Nearly, I couldn't receive your call this morning.I thought that it was a junk call. It's a good thing that I got your call. In what ways are credit card better than cash? Credit cards are accepted for common payment in Korea. I always use credit cards for my payment.It's very useful because I don't need anymore to have a lot of cash in my pocket.Besides,I often feel happy because I can collect the points whenever as I shop. Of course,I can use them later as cash for my future purchases.That's why I prefer credit cards. Thank you! Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! I hope that you are having a great Monday. Thank you for answering my call as well. See you again tomorrow.

~Kelly^^

Hi there! Happy Monday! Nearly, I couldn\'t receive your call this morning. I thought that it was a junk call. It\'s a good thing that I got your call.
>> Correct.
In what ways are credit card better than cash?
Credit cards are accepted for common payment in Korea.

>> Credit cards are accepted as common form of payment in Korea.

I always use credit cards for my payment.

>> Correct.

It\'s very useful because I don\'t need anymore to have a lot of cash in my pocket.

>> It\'s very useful because I don\'t need to bring a lot of cash in my pocket anymore.

Besides,I often feel happy because I can collect the points whenever as I shop.

>> Besides, I often feel happy because I can collect points whenever I shop.

Of course,I can use them later as cash for my future purchases.

>> Of course, I can use them as payment for my future purchases.

That\'s why I prefer credit cards.
>> Correct.
Thank you! Bye!

>> Correct.

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