11. 17 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 8.
Question:Do you watch your weight? What foods do you think are healthy?
I sometimes watch my weight using a weighing machine in my home. Sometimes I am very surprised to see my weighing machine. "Oh my god. What happened to me? Why am I fatter than last month?" Sometimes I feel very relieved to see my weighing machine. "Oh, I eat and eat but my weight is maintained. How good it is!" I am not on a diet but I always worried to be fat and I tried to eat healthy food like vegetables, fruits, pumpkin and so on. And i also tried not to eat too oily food, hamburger, pizza and so on.
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I sometimes watch my weight using a weighing machine in my home.
>> Correct!
Sometimes I am very surprised to see my weighing machine.
>> Sometimes I am very surprised to see my weight on my weighing machine.
\"Oh my god. What happened to me? Why am I fatter than last month?\"
>> Correct! (^_^)
Sometimes I feel very relieved to see my weighing machine.
>> Sometimes I feel very relieved to see my weight on my weighing machine.
\"Oh, I eat and eat but my weight is maintained. How good it is!\"
>> \"Oh, I ate and ate but my weight is maintained. How good it is!\"
I am not on a diet but I always worried to be fat and I tried to eat healthy food like vegetables, fruits, pumpkin and so on.
>> I am not on a diet but I always worry of getting fat so I tried to eat healthy food like vegetables, fruits, pumpkin and so on.
And i also tried not to eat too oily food, hamburger, pizza and so on.
>> And I also tried not to eat too oily food, hamburger, pizza and so on.
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