11.18 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon!
Have a noce lunch.
Homework
What is your opinion of cosmetic surgery?
I think cosmetic is personal freedom. At the job interview,first impressions are very important. Unfortunately, society needs to a good shape.If we can't change society,we should follow it's needs. For this reason, I am agree with cosmetic surgery. I think in case of woman,it is just beautiful thing that the greedy of being more beautiful shape.
Thank you ma'am!
See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your opinion regarding cosmetic surgery. You are very open-minded when it comes to this issue. I hope that we can discuss this issue further in the class. Have a great afternoon.
~t. Kelly~
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!
>> Correct!Have a nice lunch.>> Correct!
>> OR: Have a great lunch.HomeworkWhat is your opinion of cosmetic surgery?I think cosmetic is personal freedom.
>> I think to undergo a cosmetic surgery/procedure is a person\'s freedom.
At the job interview, first impressions are very important.
>> In a job interview, first impressions are very important.
Unfortunately, society needs to a good shape.
>> Unfortunately, people in the society require us to be in good shape.
If we can\'t change society, we should follow it\'s needs.
>> If we can\'t change the society, we should follow according to its demands.
For this reason, I am agree with cosmetic surgery.
>> For this reason, I agree with cosmetic surgery.
I think in case of woman, it is just beautiful thing that the greedy of being more beautiful shape.
>> For women, it is good to be conscious about their looks and be more beautiful.Thank you ma\'am!>> Correct!
See you tomorrow!
>> Correct!
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