11.18 Homework

2014-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! I am so thankful for your funny leading in our class.Have a good day! Do you think people look better without make-up and comestics? I like woman better with make-up. I think that woman's cosmetics is etiquette for other people. I used to consider people look better without make-up and cosmetics in the past, but I don't think so anymore. I think that to make everybody look more attractive and beautiful is the duty of wemen. Thank you! Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Mr. [이름]! I am so glad that you had fun in our class today. I hope that you will not get tired laughing in our class. Have fun and stay happy. See you! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! >> Correct. I am so thankful for your funny leading in our class. >> I am so thankful for your funny strategy in our class. Have a good day! >> Correct.Do you think people look better without make-up and comestics?I like woman better with make-up. >> I like women better with make-up. I think that woman\'s cosmetics is etiquette for other people. >> I think that women wearing make-up is a sign of good etiquette for other people. I used to consider people look better without make-up and cosmetics in the past, but I don\'t think so anymore. >> I used to think that people look better without make-up and cosmetics in the past, but I don\'t think that way anymore. I think that to make everybody look more attractive and beautiful is the duty of wemen.>> I think that to make everybody look more attractive and beautiful is a duty of women. Thank you! Bye! >> Correct.  

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