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2019-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[Discuss how going through disappointments can have a positive side.] I have been disappointing from last winter. I fell off the final interview for a researcher at the national institutes last January. The last candidates were two persons including me and we had the last interview together. I was very disappointed because I also thought he will succeed in the application after finishing the interview. But, I believe that we can grow from many failures. Before trying and entering to the real battle, I don\'t know my position in society. I can realize \'what was insufficient\' \'what should I do for better\' at the real battle. And it is usually started from disappointments or inconvenience. When I fell off the selection of the research budget, although I disappointed, I knew what should I supplement from the evaluation opinion. I can get the budget and will succeed in and a job interview in the future from the base on these failures.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I appreciate your thoughts! Well done! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah 

I have been disappointing from last winter.
>>I was disappointed last winter.
I fell off the final interview for a researcher at the national institutes last January.
>>CORRECT
The last candidates were two persons including me and we had the last interview together.
>>CORRECT
I was very disappointed because I also thought he will succeed in the application after finishing the interview.
>>CORRECT
But, I believe that we can grow from many failures.
>>CORRECT
Before trying and entering to the real battle, I don\'t know my position in society.
>>CORRECT
I can realize \'what was insufficient\' \'what should I do for better\' at the real battle.
>>CORRECT
And it is usually started from disappointments or inconvenience.
>>CORRECT
When I fell off the selection of the research budget, although I disappointed, I knew what should I supplement from the evaluation opinion.
>>When I fell off the selection from the research budget, although disappointed, I supplemented my opinion with the evaluation.
I can get the budget and will succeed in and a job interview in the future from the base on these failures.
>>I am confident that we\'ll be able to get the budget and succeed in future interviews based on these failures.

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