11/18 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Discuss how going through disappointments can have a positive side.]
I have been disappointing from last winter.
I fell off the final interview for a researcher at the national institutes last January.
The last candidates were two persons including me and we had the last interview together.
I was very disappointed because I also thought he will succeed in the application after finishing the interview.
But, I believe that we can grow from many failures.
Before trying and entering to the real battle, I don\'t know my position in society.
I can realize \'what was insufficient\' \'what should I do for better\' at the real battle.
And it is usually started from disappointments or inconvenience.
When I fell off the selection of the research budget, although I disappointed, I knew what should I supplement from the evaluation opinion.
I can get the budget and will succeed in and a job interview in the future from the base on these failures.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I appreciate your thoughts! Well done! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>I was disappointed last winter.
I fell off the final interview for a researcher at the national institutes last January.
I fell off the final interview for a researcher at the national institutes last January.
>>CORRECT
The last candidates were two persons including me and we had the last interview together.
The last candidates were two persons including me and we had the last interview together.
>>CORRECT
I was very disappointed because I also thought he will succeed in the application after finishing the interview.
I was very disappointed because I also thought he will succeed in the application after finishing the interview.
>>CORRECT
But, I believe that we can grow from many failures.
But, I believe that we can grow from many failures.
>>CORRECT
Before trying and entering to the real battle, I don\'t know my position in society.
Before trying and entering to the real battle, I don\'t know my position in society.
>>CORRECT
I can realize \'what was insufficient\' \'what should I do for better\' at the real battle.
I can realize \'what was insufficient\' \'what should I do for better\' at the real battle.
>>CORRECT
And it is usually started from disappointments or inconvenience.
And it is usually started from disappointments or inconvenience.
>>CORRECT
When I fell off the selection of the research budget, although I disappointed, I knew what should I supplement from the evaluation opinion.
When I fell off the selection of the research budget, although I disappointed, I knew what should I supplement from the evaluation opinion.
>>When I fell off the selection from the research budget, although disappointed, I supplemented my opinion with the evaluation.
I can get the budget and will succeed in and a job interview in the future from the base on these failures.
I can get the budget and will succeed in and a job interview in the future from the base on these failures.
>>I am confident that we\'ll be able to get the budget and succeed in future interviews based on these failures.
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