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2018-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> How important do you think myths are in defining cultural identity? I believe the myth only can be reflected fragmentary part of the cultural identity. Human culture has universality. Due to the similarity of the development process and the conscious system, myths have a common characteristic throughout the world. For that reason, we can not fully interpret a particular culture with myth alone, but it can be a dangerous attempt to create a cultural prejudice.

강사 첨삭

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Jean

How important do you think myths are in defining cultural identity?

I believe the myth only can be reflected fragmentary part of the cultural identity.

>> I believe that myths can be reflected in our cultural identity only in fragments.

Human culture has universality.

>> correct

Due to the similarity of the development process and the conscious system, myths have a common characteristic throughout the world.

>> correct

>> [What does \'conscious system\' mean?]

For that reason, we can not fully interpret a particular culture with myth alone, but it can be a dangerous attempt to create a cultural prejudice.

>> For that reason, we cannot fully interpret a particular culture with myth alone, and it can be dangerous to attempt to create a cultural prejudice based on myths.

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