11.19 Homework

2013-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good afternoon,Ma'am? It is getting colder and colder. Be careful not to catch a cold. Homework. Do you worry about the world's changing weather? Yes, Of course. I think, there are two factors that reason of changing weather. The first is natural cause, and the last is artificial cause,such as greenhouse gases. Mankind has used fire and cattle breeding. The forests were more destroyed. Development of industry gives us convenience,but it gives us disaster as well. Now, we must pay for it.Even now,it is not too late. Just now,we must worry about this problem together,and we have to do something about world's changing weather. Together... Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! I like really like the way you answered our essay question. It wa svery smart. Keep it up! I really hope that we can still save our environment not just for us but also for the next generation. Have a great and safe day! ~t. KELLY~ Good afternoon, Ma\'am! >> Correct.It is getting colder and colder. Be careful not to catch a cold.>> Correct.Homework.Do you worry about the world\'s changing weather?Yes, Of course. >> Correct.I think, there are two factors that reason of changing weather. >> I think, there are two factors that cause changes in the weather. The first is natural cause, and the last is artificial cause, such as greenhouse gases. >> The first is natural cause, and the other is artificial cause like greenhouse gases.Mankind has used fire and cattle breeding. >> Correct. The forests were more destroyed. >> Forests were destroyed. Development of industry gives us convenience, but it gives us disaster as well. >> The development of industry gives us convenience, but it gives us disaster as well.Now, we must pay for it. >> Correct. Even now, it is not too late. >> Correct. Just now, we must worry about this problem together, and we have to do something about world\'s changing weather. Together... >> Now, we must worry about this problem together, and we have to do something about the world\'s changing weather. together... Thank you! >> Correct.

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