11.19 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning? Happy wednesday!
Is beauty important?
Yes. I am so sorry. I agree with that.
I think that beauty is so important for women. Even though they were born regardless of their own idea, most of Man often evaluate women with their appearance. The same is true of my case. So, [이름] ladies want to have a plastic surgery these days in our country. Lately, this has become a social problem in Korea. The progress of this issue is interesting from now on.
Thank you! Byebye!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for so much for doing your homeowrk. You finished early today. kkk Anyway, have a good day!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning! Happy wednesday!>> Correct.Is beauty important?Yes. I am so sorry. I agree with that.
>> Correct.I think that beauty is so important for women.
>> Correct.
Even though they were born regardless of their own idea, most of Man often evaluate women with their appearance.
>> Even though they were born regardless of their own idea, most men often evaluate women with their appearance.
The same is true of my case.
>> The same thing is true in my case.
So, [이름] ladies want to have a plastic surgery these days in our country.
>> Correct.
Lately, this has become a social problem in Korea.
>> Correct.
The progress of this issue is interesting from now on.
>> The progress of this issue is really interesting.Thank you! Byebye!
>> Correct.
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