11/19 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t agree with the opinion.
I know many people live together without getting married.
But, I think that marriage and just cohabitation without marriage are absolutely different.
And their degree of responsibility is also very different.
If I am cohabitating with boyfriend, I can break up with him anytime.
However, if I got married, the situation is not so easy and I firstly should conversate and understand him.
The personal responsibility for living together is much lower before getting married.
Of course, it\'s not just good or bad.
If we live together before getting married, we can make a better choice about whether or not to get married.
But, It doesn\'t make me experience everything after marriage.
There is a lot of suffering and adversity after marriage, and we have to deal with them together.
In this process, I think that the meaning of the word \'Love\' broadens a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework on time! I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts on this one too. I agree with you. Marriage is not outdated. For western people probably it is, but fortunately, we are Asians we still do value the sanctity of marriage and it\'s importance. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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I know many people live together without getting married.
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But, I think that marriage and just cohabitation without marriage are absolutely different.
But, I think that marriage and just cohabitation without marriage are absolutely different.
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And their degree of responsibility is also very different.
And their degree of responsibility is also very different.
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If I am cohabitating with boyfriend, I can break up with him anytime.
If I am cohabitating with boyfriend, I can break up with him anytime.
>>If I am cohabiting with my boyfriend, I can break up with him anytime.
However, if I got married, the situation is not so easy and I firstly should conversate and understand him.
However, if I got married, the situation is not so easy and I firstly should conversate and understand him.
>>However, if we are married, the situation becomes different and we would have to establish a good communication and understanding of each other.
The personal responsibility for living together is much lower before getting married.
The personal responsibility for living together is much lower before getting married.
>>The responsibilities of just living together is much lower than being married.
Of course, it\'s not just good or bad.
Of course, it\'s not just good or bad.
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If we live together before getting married, we can make a better choice about whether or not to get married.
If we live together before getting married, we can make a better choice about whether or not to get married.
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But, It doesn\'t make me experience everything after marriage.
But, It doesn\'t make me experience everything after marriage.
>>But, so far as I know I haven\'t experienced much about marriage.
There is a lot of suffering and adversity after marriage, and we have to deal with them together.
There is a lot of suffering and adversity after marriage, and we have to deal with them together.
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In this process, I think that the meaning of the word \'Love\' broadens a lot.
In this process, I think that the meaning of the word \'Love\' broadens a lot.
>>CORRECT
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