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2013-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

It's too cold outside! ㅡ.ㅡ I was talking with my boyfriend at Daunkin last night. ^^; He visited Ilsan, after I finished my work. We talked about our school club and the plan about go abroad. He will go to Tunisia for 6 months, and I'll go to Thai for 5 months. We both leave in Feb,2014. ㅜㅜ So we try to have much time before we go. By the way, I think this topic (textbook) is hsrd to answer. Because I'm not that interested in arts.^^; But now I' trying to make a good answer.

강사 첨삭

Wow, that seems to be a tough decision for the both of you but I believe you are bith already decided. Well, I wish you both the best and I hope you prosper in those two different countries. As for this essay, you did really well, look, you have not much corrections! See you!

-T. Donna
I So we try to have much time before we go. 

t\'s too cold outside! ㅡ.ㅡ

>> Correct!
I was talking with my boyfriend at Daunkin last night. ^^;

>> Correct!
He visited Ilsan, after I finished my work. 

>> Correct!
We talked about our school club and the plan about go abroad. 

>> We talked about our school club and the plan about going abroad. 
He will go to
Tunisia for 6 months, and I\'ll go to Thai for 5 months.

>> Correct!
We both leave in Feb,2014. ㅜㅜ

>> Correct!
So we try to have much time before we go. 
>> So we will try to have much time before we go. 
By the way, I think this topic (textbook) is hard to answer. 

>> Correct!
Because I\'m not that interested in arts.^^;

>> Correct!
But now I\' trying to make a good answer.

>> Correct!

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