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2018-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>>Will artificial intelligence ever replace the need for humans to work? I believe that it\'s really hard to replace the need for human resources by the artificial intelligence. Alvin Toffer, the futurologist, defined the singularity as one point on the time line that A.I. pass over the intelligence of the humanity. When the singularity comes, humans are replaced by robots which have hyper-intelligence. But for that, the P-NP conundrum must be solved first. Unfortunately, or fortunately for mankind, the P-NP difficulty, simply saying, \'can all kinds of problems be solved in a finite time?\' is not even giving the hope that there is the mathematical answer to the question. This means that it is impossible to explain most of the things that humans can do in mathematics, which leads to the conclusion that it\'s beyond the reality that building programs to replace humans extensively and perfectly.

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Jean

Will artificial intelligence ever replace the need for humans to work?

I believe that it\'s really hard to replace the need for human resources by the artificial intelligence.
>> I believe that it\'s extremely hard to replace the need for human resources with artificial intelligence.

Alvin Toffer, the futurologist, defined the singularity as one point on the time line that A.I. pass over the intelligence of the humanity.
>> Alvin Toffer, the futurologist, defined the singularity as one point in the timeline that A.I. surpasses the intelligence of the entire humanity.
>> [What does \'singularity\' mean in the above sentence? ]

When the singularity comes, humans are replaced by robots which have hyper-intelligence.
>> correct

But for that, the P-NP conundrum must be solved first.
>> correct

Unfortunately, or fortunately for mankind, the P-NP difficulty, simply saying, \'can all kinds of problems be solved in a finite time?\' is not even giving the hope that there is the mathematical answer to the question.
>> [The idea in this sentence is confusing me.]

This means that it is impossible to explain most of the things that humans can do in mathematics, which leads to the conclusion that it\'s beyond the reality that building programs to replace humans extensively and perfectly.
>> This means that it is impossible to explain most of the things that humans can do in mathematics, which leads to the conclusion that it\'s not realistic to build programs that can completely replace humans in the workplace.

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