11.20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Ma'am!
Good afternoon!
Homework
What motivates you to study English?
I have a great dream.
The dream is traveling of all around the world. So I need to studying English.
And I often meet foreign customers at work. I think, studying English is my profession duty. So,I started studying English early this year.
As always,I want to thank you for your consideration and wonderful teaching.
Thanks to you,I think my English skill is improved very much.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir! I hope that your dream to travel the world would serve as an inspiration and motivation to improve your English skills. I can say that you improved already, but I would encourage you to study harder for you to be able to speak with your foreign customers fluently and confidently. You can do it because you have the skill. We just have to develop it. Take care Mr. [이름]!
~t. KELLY~
Hi Ma\'am!
>> Correct.Good afternoon!>> Correct.HomeworkWhat motivates you to study English?I have a great dream.
>> Correct.The dream is traveling of all around the world.
>> My dream is to travel around the world.
So I need to studying English.>> So I need to study English.
>> So I\'m studying English.And I often meet foreign customers at work.
>> Correct.
I think, studying English is my profession duty.
>> I think, studying English is my duty.
So, I started studying English early this year.>> Correct.
As always, I want to thank you for your consideration and wonderful teaching.
>> Correct.Thanks to you, I think my English skill is improved very much.>> Thanks to you, I think my English skill has improved very much.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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