11.20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning! I am sorry that I slept late this morning. I was half asleep.I think my class was not good today.
How do you celebrate Christmas Day?
First, we prepair lots of things to celebrate the coming of Christ in the Catholic church for a long time.At the D-Day,I attend the Mass with my family.We celebrate the birth of baby Jesus during the Mass. After Mass, we enjoy some foods like rice cakes,warm soup together.and we share the blessing together.I am looking forward to Cristmas.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your doing your homework. Anyway, don\'t worry abou our class this morning. You still did a good job. Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning!
>> Correct.
I am sorry that I slept late this morning.
>> I am sorry that I woke up late this morning.
I was half asleep.
>> Correct.
I think my class was not good today.
>> Correct.How do you celebrate Christmas Day?First, we prepair lots of things to celebrate the coming of Christ in the Catholic church for a long time.
>> First, we prepair lots of things to celebrate the coming of Christ in the Catholic church.
At the D-Day,I attend the Mass with my family.
>> On Christmas Day, I attend mass with my family.
We celebrate the birth of baby Jesus during the Mass.
>> Correct.
After Mass, we enjoy some foods like rice cakes,warm soup together.and we share the blessing together.
>> After the mass, we enjoy some foods like rice cakes and warm soup together and we share the blessing together.
I am looking forward to Cristmas.
>> Correct.*** ChristmasThank you!
>> Correct.
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