11.21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Finally,we can enjoy a weekend. I hope that you have a wonderful weekend with your boyfriend.
How important is tourism to your country?
I think that tourism is a very important business to our country. As you know,Korea has good environments for tourism. For example, seventy percentage of Korean land is mountains and Korea has beautiful four seasons.But Korea lacks natural resources like gas, that's why we need to develope and encourage our tourism. I think that it is really worth visiting in Korea. I hope that you also visit in Korea someday.
Thank you! Byebye! .
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Finally, it\'s the weekend again. I hope that you will also have a great time. Anyway, thank you for your homework. You are always diligent in doing it. Have a fun day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there!
>> Correct.
Finally,we can enjoy a weekend.
>> Finally, we can enjoy the weekend.
I hope that you have a wonderful weekend with your boyfriend.>> I hope that you that you will have a wonderful weekend with your boyfriend.How important is tourism to your country?I think that tourism is a very important business to our country.
>> Correct.
As you know, Korea has good environments for tourism.
>> Correct.
For example, seventy percentage of Korean land is mountains and Korea has beautiful four seasons.
>> For example, seventy percent of Koreans land is covered by mountains and has beautiful four seasons also.
But Korea lacks natural resources like gas, that\'s why we need to develope and encourage our tourism.
>> But Korea lacks natural resources like gas, that\'s why we need to develop and promote our tourism industry.
I think that it is really worth visiting in Korea.
>> Correct.
I hope that you also visit in Korea someday.
>> Correct.Thank you! Byebye!
>> Correct.
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