11/21 homework
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[Finish this thought: If I were able to change one thing about myself it would be]
If I were able to change only one thing about myself, I would actively change my master and doctor course.
I was in the same university for ten years from undergraduate school to Ph.D course.
I think I became lazy and bored in Ph,D period.
I wanted to go out of the university.
Finally, I left the university as soon as I graduate Ph.D.
But, sometimes I thought if I were able to more concentrate the study my thesis\'s quality would be improved.
Everyone regrets something and almost all researchers do about their thesis because we were too young.
Nowadays, when I apply to the university and research institute, I often read my thesis.
I feel the inconvenience at that time.
However, I can not change my thesis forever.
So, I should do to study hard now.
We have many regrets and things that I want to change.
But If we realized or knew from the past and it would affect, It was sufficiently meaningful.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing and sending your homework on time. I really appreciate your effort and consistency with it! ^^
Well thought of homework. Well done composition. I agree with you. We made a lot of mistakes in the past, but I think they were crucial for learning and for improvement. But how we wish we could have done more! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>If I were able to change only one thing about myself, I would actively change my master\'s and doctor\'s course.
I was in the same university for ten years from undergraduate school to Ph.D course.
I was in the same university for ten years from undergraduate school to Ph.D course.
>>CORRECT
I think I became lazy and bored in Ph,D period.
I think I became lazy and bored in Ph,D period.
>>I think I became lazy and bored during my PhD years.
I wanted to go out of the university.
I wanted to go out of the university.
>>CORRECT
Finally, I left the university as soon as I graduate Ph.D.
Finally, I left the university as soon as I graduate Ph.D.
>>Finally, I left the university as soon as I graduated my PhD.
But, sometimes I thought if I were able to more concentrate the study my thesis\'s quality would be improved.
But, sometimes I thought if I were able to more concentrate the study my thesis\'s quality would be improved.
>>But, sometimes I thought that if I was able to concentrate more with my studies, the quality of my thesis would have improved more.
Everyone regrets something and almost all researchers do about their thesis because we were too young.
>>CORRECT
Nowadays, when I apply to the university and research institute, I often read my thesis.
Nowadays, when I apply to the university and research institute, I often read my thesis.
>>CORRECT
I feel the inconvenience at that time.
I feel the inconvenience at that time.
>>I feel uncomfortable at that time.
However, I can not change my thesis forever.
However, I can not change my thesis forever.
>>However, I can not change my thesis anymore.
So, I should do to study hard now.
So, I should do to study hard now.
>>So, what I can do is study harder now.
We have many regrets and things that I want to change.
We have many regrets and things that I want to change.
>>I have many regrets and things that I want to change.
But If we realized or knew from the past and it would affect, It was sufficiently meaningful.
But If we realized or knew from the past and it would affect, It was sufficiently meaningful.
>>And if we realized earlier and knew the effect, then it could have been better. (I\'m not sure if this is what you meant. Hope I got it right. ^ ^)
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