11.21 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. approached
2. as soon as you get off
3. attending
4. head towards
5. coming over
1. The winter was already approached in korea. It was suddenly the way cooler than before. It wasn\'t coming snow yet but it was freezing windy.
2. As soon as you get off the subway and then pass the department store which is located in the basement, you can see the main street of Sinchon. It is area where i live.
3. I am attending in lesson in academy under support of goverment and it is going to finish in December 30th.
4. Although i go to the library, i head towards the cosmetic stores and clothes shops where are surrounding on my way library.
5. Why don\'t you come over to my place for dineer? It is all ready.
강사 첨삭
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Cheers!
Jean
1. approached
2. as soon as you get off
3. attending
4. head towards
5. coming over
1. The winter was already approached in korea. It was suddenly the way cooler than before. It wasn\'t coming snow yet but it was freezing windy.
>> The winter has already come in Korea. It was suddenly way cooler than before. It hasn\'t snowed yet but the wind is freezing.
2. As soon as you get off the subway and then pass the department store which is located in the basement, you can see the main street of Sinchon. It is area where i live.
>> As soon as you get off the subway and pass the department store, which is located in the basement, you can see the main street of Sinchon. It is the area where I live.
3. I am attending in lesson in academy under support of goverment and it is going to finish in December 30th.
>> I am attending classes in an academy under the support of the government, and it is going to end on December 30th.
4. Although i go to the library, i head towards the cosmetic stores and clothes shops where are surrounding on my way library.
>> Although I was planning to go to the library, I headed towards the cosmetic stores and clothes shops on my way library.
5. Why don\'t you come over to my place for dinner? It is all ready.
>> correct
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