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2021-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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This weekend.... We stared going to school!! Today is very funny day. I am going to study hard&play funny with my friends weekend! My brother said, \"brother! I will eat very delicious food weekend!!!\" hahaha lol... I want to come 2022years fast!!!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^


Today is very funny day.
>>>Today is a very fun day.

I am going to study hard&play funny with my friends weekend!
>>>I am going to study hard & play with my friends this weekend!

My brother said, \"brother! I will eat very delicious food weekend!!!\"
>>>
My brother said, \"Brother! I will eat delicious food this weekend!!!\"

I want to come 2022years fast!!!
>>> I can\'t wait for 2022 to come. 

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