11.22 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
I am sorry,I just woke up by your call,so I was a little confused.
Homework
What makes you a good friend.
I think, to be a good friend,it is necessary to hear his story well,and to share tough job with him. If you are going to be a popular friend,listening to your friend. Be sure to help when he is placed danger.Don't lie,and don't do bad things
and you will be a good friend.I have two friends.I love them tremendously.
Thank you!
Have a nice weekend.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework right away. Don\'t be sorry for today\'s class because you still did a good job. I think I just know you well, that\'s why I knew that you just woke up when I called. But nothing to worry Sir. Anyway, I can say that you are a good friend. Your friends are lucky to have you in their lives. Have a great weekend Sir!
~t. KELLY~
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct!I am sorry, I just woke up by your call, so I was a little confused.>> I am sorry, I was awakened by your call so I was a little confused.HomeworkWhat makes you a good friend.I think, to be a good friend, it is necessary to hear his story well, and to share tough job with him.
>> Correct!
>> I think to be a good friend, you must be a good listener and learn how to share a tough job with your friend.
If you are going to be a popular friend,l istening to your friend.
>> Even if you are popular, you must know how to listen to your friend.
Be sure to help when he is placed danger.
>> Be sure to help when he is placed in danger.
>> Be sure to help when he is in danger.
Don\'t lie,and don\'t do bad things>> Correct!
and you will be a good friend.I have two friends.
>> Correct!
I love them tremendously.>> Correct!Thank you!>> Correct!
Have a nice weekend.
>> Correct!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.