11.22 Homework

2013-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! I am sorry,I just woke up by your call,so I was a little confused. Homework What makes you a good friend. I think, to be a good friend,it is necessary to hear his story well,and to share tough job with him. If you are going to be a popular friend,listening to your friend. Be sure to help when he is placed danger.Don't lie,and don't do bad things and you will be a good friend.I have two friends.I love them tremendously. Thank you! Have a nice weekend.

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Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework right away. Don\'t be sorry for today\'s class because you still did a good job. I think I just know you well, that\'s why I knew that you just woke up when I called. But nothing to worry Sir. Anyway, I can say that you are a good friend. Your friends are lucky to have you in their lives. Have a great weekend Sir! ~t. KELLY~ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct!I am sorry, I just woke up by your call, so I was a little confused.>> I am sorry, I was awakened by your call so I was a little confused.HomeworkWhat makes you a good friend.I think, to be a good friend, it is necessary to hear his story well, and to share tough job with him. >> Correct! >> I think to be a good friend, you must be a good listener and learn how to share a tough job with your friend. If you are going to be a popular friend,l istening to your friend. >> Even if you are popular, you must know how to listen to your friend. Be sure to help when he is placed danger. >> Be sure to help when he is placed in danger. >> Be sure to help when he is in danger. Don\'t lie,and don\'t do bad things>> Correct! and you will be a good friend.I have two friends. >> Correct! I love them tremendously.>> Correct!Thank you!>> Correct! Have a nice weekend. >> Correct!

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