11/22 homework
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I agree with it a little.
Especially, first impressions are very important to elders and it is almost not changed forever.
Elders have a lot of experiences and met a lot of people.
So, they believe that they can recognize the personal characteristics when they meet unknown people.
Young people think that is an old fogey.
Surely the first interview is very important.
But, there are many kinds of people in the world.
Someone might difficult to speak in front of an unknown person, in spite of the efforts.
Someone can speak very fluently, but he/she doesn\'t have a lot of knowledge.
We should know that there is nothing absolute.
There are many things which we don\'t know.
So, we should have an open mind and the ability to judge the person.
Nonetheless, I heard that speaking skill is most important to survive in the fourth industrial revolution era.
I think that it means showing knowledge is important because the information already overflows in the internet.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework and for sending it early. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Nice thoughts on this one. Appearance and making the first impression is really important, but like what you have said, there is more than meets the eye. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
Especially, first impressions are very important to elders and it is almost not changed forever.
Especially, first impressions are very important to elders and it is almost not changed forever.
>>Especially, first impressions are very important to elders and it has almost been the same ever since.
Elders have a lot of experiences and met a lot of people.
Elders have a lot of experiences and met a lot of people.
>>Elders have a lot of experiences and meet a lot of people.
So, they believe that they can recognize the personal characteristics when they meet unknown people.
So, they believe that they can recognize the personal characteristics when they meet unknown people.
>>So, they believe that they can recognize the person\'s characteristics when they meet a person for the first time.
Young people think that is an old fogey.
Young people think that is an old fogey.
>>CORRECT
Surely the first interview is very important.
Surely the first interview is very important.
>>CORRECT
But, there are many kinds of people in the world.
But, there are many kinds of people in the world.
>>CORRECT
Someone might difficult to speak in front of an unknown person, in spite of the efforts.
Someone might difficult to speak in front of an unknown person, in spite of the efforts.
>>Someone may have difficulty speaking in front of a stranger despite the effort.
Someone can speak very fluently, but he/she doesn\'t have a lot of knowledge.
Someone can speak very fluently, but he/she doesn\'t have a lot of knowledge.
>>CORRECT
We should know that there is nothing absolute.
We should know that there is nothing absolute.
>>CORRECT
There are many things which we don\'t know.
There are many things which we don\'t know.
>>CORRECT
So, we should have an open mind and the ability to judge the person.
So, we should have an open mind and the ability to judge the person.
>>So we should have an open mind and not immediately judge a person by his/her looks.
Nonetheless, I heard that speaking skill is most important to survive in the fourth industrial revolution era.
Nonetheless, I heard that speaking skill is most important to survive in the fourth industrial revolution era.
>>CORRECT
I think that it means showing knowledge is important because the information already overflows in the internet.
I think that it means showing knowledge is important because the information already overflows in the internet.
>>I think that it means showing knowledge is important because the information already overflows on the internet.
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