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Preview. Roxy got divorced his wife for his son Ted.

>> Preview: Roxy divorced his wife for his son Ted.
Chapter5 : Another family member

>> Chapter 5 : Another Family Member
Roxy had been lonely and depressed after Jessa left him.

>> CORRECT!

He doesn\'t hava any other hope nor wish.

>> He doesn\'t have any other hope or wish.

Actually he was a CEO of big toy company at young age.

>> Actually, he was a CEO of a big toy company at young age.

However, since he lost his son, he quit and just took a rest at home.

>> >> CORRECT!

He coudln\'t do anything at his office because whenever he sees toys, it reminded him of his lovely son Ted.

>> CORRECT!
One day Ted heard his wife Jessa got married and her new husband adopted Ted for her.

>> One day, Roxy heard his wife Jessa got married and her new husband adopted Ted for her.

She became happy again, and she started to raise the baby with love to avoid the mistake she took before.

>> She became happy again and she started to raise the baby with love to avoid the mistake she had before.

Roxy was sad and depressed because he still loves his ex-wife.

>> CORRECT!

However he thought he should bless her and her new family because when she is with Ted, she is happy and lively.

>> However, he thought he should give his blessing to her and her new family because when she is with Ted, she is happy and lively.

Roxy missed his son as well so sometimes he tried to watch Ted from a distance.

>> CORRECT!

Of course Roxy knew that he must not break the happiness of Ted.

>> CORRECT!

Ted reconized that his new father is his physical dad.

>> [Do you mean]: Ted thought his new father is his biological dad.