11/23 homework
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It depends on the items that need fixing or changing.
If it is electronic home appliances, I never try to fix myself.
I have a lot of experiences of failure when I try to fix something electronic devices it just becomes obsolete.
When I fix myself, there is a very important point.
The fixed result from me will be worse than that of an expert.
Therefore, I have to be able to admit my clumsy skills or mistakes.
When I decorate or fix house items myself, affection for my home grows and I feel more comfortable with the house.
And finally, I feel the house is a sweet home.
I like a simple style house, so I will not fill up my home with many furniture or electronic application.
My house that I will move to tomorrow is an apartment.
So, the control office can help me with many things that I need fixing or changing.
But, If I live in a private house, not an apartment, I should fix and change many things myself.
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Hello [이름]!
It\'s been a while since I read your homework, and so, thanks for this. I guess, the most important thing is that the house has a warm atmosphere and anyone who visits will feel comfortable and relaxed. ^ ^
-Rachel
It depends on the items that need fixing or changing.
>> correct
If it is electronic home appliances, I never try to fix myself.
If it is electronic home appliances, I never try to fix myself.
>> correct
>> OR: If the damaged item is an electric appliance, I don\'t dare to fix it myself.
I have a lot of experiences of failure when I try to fix something electronic devices it just becomes obsolete.
I have a lot of experiences of failure when I try to fix something electronic devices it just becomes obsolete.
>> I have a lot of experiences fixing electronic devices and they just become completely useless.
When I fix myself, there is a very important point.
When I fix myself, there is a very important point.
>> When I fix something myself, expect one thing.
The fixed result from me will be worse than that of an expert.
The fixed result from me will be worse than that of an expert.
>> The result will be worse than that of an unskilled person.
Therefore, I have to be able to admit my clumsy skills or mistakes.
Therefore, I have to be able to admit my clumsy skills or mistakes.
>> Therefore, I admit my clumsiness and inability to fix something electronic.
When I decorate or fix house items myself, affection for my home grows and I feel more comfortable with the house.
When I decorate or fix house items myself, affection for my home grows and I feel more comfortable with the house.
>> On the other hand, when I organize some things or decorate my house, I feel more comfortable knowing that I did something for my house.
And finally, I feel the house is a sweet home.
And finally, I feel the house is a sweet home.
>> correct
I like a simple style house, so I will not fill up my home with many furniture or electronic application.
I like a simple style house, so I will not fill up my home with many furniture or electronic application.
>> correct
My house that I will move to tomorrow is an apartment.
My house that I will move to tomorrow is an apartment.
>> I will be moving to an apartment tomorrow.
So, the control office can help me with many things that I need fixing or changing.
So, the control office can help me with many things that I need fixing or changing.
>> correct (we can also say the administration office instead of control office)
But, If I live in a private house, not an apartment, I should fix and change many things myself.
But, If I live in a private house, not an apartment, I should fix and change many things myself.
>> correct
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