11.24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good evening! It's raining a lot here in Changwon. I submited my homework so late.It was a little busy today.
What do you hope to do in the future?
I hope that I will have a chance to work as long as I can work,even though it will be no great works. I would like to work that I want to do something in the future such as a lecturer and chef.
Thank you! See you,byebye!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework even if you are busy.
Take care!Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good evening!
>> Correct.
It\'s raining a lot here in Changwon.
>> It is raining heavily here in Changwon.
I submited my homework so late.
>> Correct.
It was a little busy today.
>> Correct.What do you hope to do in the future?I hope that I will have a chance to work as long as I can work, even though it will be no great works.
>> I hope that I will have a chance to work as long as I can even if it is not related to my profession.
I would like to work that I want to do something in the future such as a lecturer and chef.>> I would like to work as a lecturer or a chef in the future.Thank you! See you,byebye!
>> Correct.
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