11.25 Homework

2014-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Are you spending your time well today? Have a good time! Are you good at managing your time? Yes. I think I am good at managing my time.I was born with diligence, I guess. I always have a formal and casual dream in my life. To achieve my goals, I always hard work and try to manage my time.You may know,there's a saying in Korea "Time is money". Try to manage your time more productive.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! The man who was born to be diligent. I like the way you described yourself. I hope that you will always be a role model to other people when it comes to diligence. Keep up the good work. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Are you spending your time well today? Have a good time!>> Correct.Are you good at managing your time?Yes. I think I am good at managing my time. I was born with diligence, I guess. >> Correct. I always have a formal and casual dream in my life. >> I always have simple and great dreams in life. To achieve my goals, I always hard work and try to manage my time. >> Correct. You may know,there\'s a saying in Korea \"Time is money\".>> You may know  a saying in Korea \"Time is money\".Try to manage your time more productive. >> Try to manage your time and be more productive.

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