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I think that the proper amount of homework is very good to improve student achievement.
But the excessive amount of homework is negative rather than achievement.
I remember that my vacation has been passed with the homework in my elementary school.
I don\'t know what did adults thought.
But, the homework was too much for the kids.
I\'d rather do something activities and take a picture of that and write the short review.
I think \'short\' is very important.
It should be not pressured and felt like play.
When we feel that it works what should I do, we don\'t want to do it.
But, if we feel it is just playing, we want to do it as soon as possible.
I think it is a good achievement.
If the target is teenagers not kids, the proper homework is able to give good achievement.
Students can achieve a sense of achievement and confidence.
So, I think the proper amount or grade of homework according to age is very important to get a positive effect.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for your thoughts on this one. I appreciate it. ^ ^
I agree with you, you know what they say; \"more is less, less is more!\" ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think that the proper amount of homework is very good to improve student achievement.
>>CORRECT
But the excessive amount of homework is negative rather than achievement.
But the excessive amount of homework is negative rather than achievement.
>>But the excessive amount of homework has a negative impact rather than encouraging achievement.
I remember that my vacation has been passed with the homework in my elementary school.
I remember that my vacation has been passed with the homework in my elementary school.
>>I remember when I was in elementary that my vacation was all about doing homework.
I don\'t know what did adults thought.
I don\'t know what did adults thought.
>>I don\'t know what the adults thought about this.
But, the homework was too much for the kids.
But, the homework was too much for the kids.
>>CORRECT
I\'d rather do something activities and take a picture of that and write the short review.
I\'d rather do something activities and take a picture of that and write the short review.
>>I\'d rather do some outdoor or fun activities, take a picture and write a short review about it.
I think \'short\' is very important.
I think \'short\' is very important.
>>CORRECT
It should be not pressured and felt like play.
It should be not pressured and felt like play.
>>It should not feel like a pressure but rather more of a game/play.
When we feel that it works what should I do, we don\'t want to do it.
When we feel that it works what should I do, we don\'t want to do it.
>>When we feel that something sounds like work, it seems that we don\'t like to do it.
But, if we feel it is just playing, we want to do it as soon as possible.
But, if we feel it is just playing, we want to do it as soon as possible.
>>CORRECT
I think it is a good achievement.
>>CORRECT
I think it is a good achievement.
>>CORRECT
If the target is teenagers not kids, the proper homework is able to give good achievement.
>>CORRECT
Students can achieve a sense of achievement and confidence.
Students can achieve a sense of achievement and confidence.
>>CORRECT
So, I think the proper amount or grade of homework according to age is very important to get a positive effect.
So, I think the proper amount or grade of homework according to age is very important to get a positive effect.
>>CORRECT
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