11/26 homework-2
학생이 쓴 원문
When I have a chance to the Philippines once again, I really hope to meet my tutor VERNA.Last week I went to Cebu in Philippines, but I couldn’t meet my tutor due to a long distance.So I hope to visit manila capital of Philippines, and meet my tutor next time.
I don’t know which terms use in which countries.
When I visited other countries(philippines, USA), I didn’t have trouble finding a toilet.
Because there were signs(pictures) for stand for that in all restaurant.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I would love to meet you too. I wish you could go back here in the Philippines or
I can visit Korea to see you. kkk.. Take care! See you later.
Love,
Verna
When I have a chance to the Philippines once again, I really hope to meet my tutor VERNA.
>>When I'll have a chance to go to the Philippines once again, I really hope to meet my tutor VERNA.
Last week I went to Cebu in Philippines, but I couldn’t meet my tutor due to a long distance.
>>Last week I went to Cebu Philippines, but I couldn't meet my tutor due the long distance.
So I hope to visit manila capital of Philippines, and meet my tutor next time.>>So I hope to visit Manila the capital city of the Philippines and meet my tutor next time.I don’t know which terms use in which countries.
>>I don’t know which terms are used in which countries.When I visited other countries(philippines, USA), I didn’t have trouble finding a toilet.
>> CorrectBecause there were signs(pictures) for stand for that in all restaurant.
>>Because there were signs(pictures)in front of the doors in all restaurants.
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