11/26 homework-2

2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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When I have a chance to the Philippines once again, I really hope to meet my tutor VERNA.Last week I went to Cebu in Philippines, but I couldn’t meet my tutor due to a long distance.So I hope to visit manila capital of Philippines, and meet my tutor next time. I don’t know which terms use in which countries. When I visited other countries(philippines, USA), I didn’t have trouble finding a toilet. Because there were signs(pictures) for stand for that in all restaurant.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I would love to meet you too. I wish you could go back here in the Philippines or I can visit Korea to see you. kkk..  Take care! See you later. Love, Verna   When I have a chance to the Philippines once again, I really hope to meet my tutor VERNA. >>When I'll  have a chance to go to the Philippines once again, I really hope to meet my tutor VERNA. Last week I went to Cebu in Philippines, but I couldn’t meet my tutor due to a long distance. >>Last week I went to Cebu Philippines, but I couldn't meet my tutor due the long distance. So I hope to visit manila capital of Philippines, and meet my tutor next time.>>So I hope to visit Manila the capital city of the Philippines and meet my tutor next time.I don’t know which terms use in which countries. >>I don’t know which terms are used in which countries.When I visited other countries(philippines, USA), I didn’t have trouble finding a toilet. >> CorrectBecause there were signs(pictures) for stand for that in all restaurant. >>Because there were signs(pictures)in front of the doors in all restaurants.

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