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I feel happy with my life though I don’t have enough money. Because I have a healthy body, parents, boy friend, many friends and my job.There are a lot of people around me who don’t these things. So someone have to stay hospital for a long time, Other people have to spend in winter season without their family. When I see them who feel lonely, I’m getting know that I’m a person who have many things.

Hello there [이름], This is a good composition. You know I had an experience living in an island here in the Philippines. At that time I had the  oppurtunity to deal with less fortunate people. I felt I was very blessed with material things and the love of the people around me. I'm always grateful for what I have. Be happy! See you on Monday! Love, Verna   I feel happy with my life though I don’t have enough money. >>CorrectBecause I have a healthy body, parents, boy friend, many friends and my job. >> I have a healthy body. I also have my parents, boyfriend, many friends and my job. There are a lot of people around me who don’t these things. >>There are a lot of people around me who don't have these things. So someone have to stay hospital for a long time, >> So someone has to stay in the hospital for along time.Other people have to spend in winter season without their family. >>Other people have to spend winter season without their family.When I see them who feel lonely, I’m getting know that I’m a person who have many things. >> When I see them lonely, I'm starting to realize that I'm a person who is blessed with many things.