11/26 homework
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework! Awesome thoughts on this one! ^ ^ This would be a very useful invention in the future especially when it comes to curing a lot of diseases. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If we could make robots in molecular scale, it will be useful to medical field.
>>If we could make robots in a molecular scale, it will be useful in the medical field.
If so, we don\'t need to perform surgery or intolerable health check.
>>Correct
Moreover, we can deliver a medicine to correct location in out body by using robot.
>>Moreover, we can easily transport a medicine to the exact location in our body using a robot.
It will be evolution, and I know many researchers are studying about this one.
>>It will be a great scientific revolution, and I know many researchers are studying about this one.
And even if it will be invented, the problem is cost.
>>Correct
So, it takes quite long time to commercialize to public.
>>Correct
>>It will probably take a long time for it to become commercialized and accessible to the public.
Nowadays, one of the most interesting industry is medical or bio-technology.
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We want to live as long as possible, surely without any disease.
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I hope it will come to us as soon as possible before I die.
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