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2013-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there? Good afternoon! Homework How has communication changed through human history. At first, mankind communicated in the language, but it was difficult to communicate with distant people. So the letters were useful for them. The invention of Radio and TV gave us more easier communication.With the advance of the Internet that computer give a chance to this,we can succeed globalization. In the future,I wonder if any convient device will be come out to us. Thank you!

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Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your opinion in today\'s issue. I agree with you that technology has made our lives convenient. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day and I will call yo again tomorrow. ~t. KELLY~ Hi there! Good afternoon!>> Correct.HomeworkHow has communication changed through human history.At first, mankind communicated in the language, but it was difficult to communicate with distant people. >> In the past, mankind communicated using their language, but it was difficult to communicate with people from other places.  So the letters were useful for them. >> So letters were useful for them.The invention of Radio and TV gave us more easier communication. >> The invention of radio and TV gave us easier means of communication. With the advance of the Internet that computer give a chance to this,we can succeed globalization.>> With the advancement of  technology and the use of Internet, we can succeed globally. In the future,I wonder if any convient device will be come out to us.>> In the future, I wonder if there would be another convenient device that would come out. Thank you! >> Correct.

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