11/27 homework
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Q: It is better for children if the whole family including aunts,uncles,and grandparents are involed in a child\'s upbringing, rather than just their parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A: I ageree with that. but, it must have that all members have to agree with consistent way of upbringing. Sometimes, too many opinions make impossile to do right.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I ageree with that. but, it must have that all members have to agree with consistent way of upbringing.
>>> I agree with it but, all members must agree with a consistent way of upbringing.
Sometimes, too many opinions make it impossible to do right.
>>> CORRECT
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