11/27 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you will be a cartoon character, who would you be and why?
<My answer>
If I will be a cartoon character, I want to be Elsa.
Because, it's childish, but I want to use magic.
Second, I like winter and snow.
Finally, I want to play with snow every time,every where.
So, If I will be a cartoon character, I want to be Elsa.
강사 첨삭
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T. Glenda
If you will be a cartoon character, who would you be and why?
< My answer>
If I will be a cartoon character, I want to be Elsa.
>> Correct
Because, it\'s childish, but I want to use magic.
>>Correct
Second, I like winter and snow.
>> Correct
Finally, I want to play with snow every time,every where.
>> Correct
So, If I will be a cartoon character, I want to be Elsa.
>> Correct
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