11/27 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^ Nice thoughts on this one. I love the thought of you wanting to live longer or maybe even to be an immortal just so you can help humanity.^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

It’s amazing, But, I don’t want to have a supernatural power for reading minds.

>>It’s amazing, but I don’t want to have a supernatural power for reading minds. (correct sentence, no need to capitalize \"but\") 
I think it will be very sad if I read someone’s mind who dislike me.

>>I think it will be very sad if I read someone’s mind who dislikes me. 
Among the various supernatural power, I want to back the time.

>>Among the various supernatural powers, I want to be able to live forever. (I hope this is what you mean, I base it from your succeeding sentence.) 
It can be very boring in whole life, because my life will be longer as much as I want.

>>It can be very boring, because I could live longer as much as I want. 
But, I can realize many precious things in the life, maybe, like true love, the value of family and job etc.

>>But, I can realize many precious things in life, maybe, like true love, the value of family and job etc. 
And I can practice to live more greatly.

>>Correct
If I have an evil heart, it will make disaster.

>>If I have an evil heart, it could be disastrous. 
But, If not, I can help so many people or perhaps human.

>>But, if not, I can help so many people.
I want to invent many things for human with my job, researcher.

>>I want to invent many things for humans with my job as a researcher.
Sometimes, we can see a person having a supernatural power in TV.

>>There are some TV shows about humans with supernatural powers. 
I really wonder they are real or liar, hahaha.

>>I really wonder whether they are real or just fiction! ^ ^