11/27 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What is the most positive change you have experienced in your life?
Nowadays, I write a daily report every night.
I saw it on Youtube.
Many people are busy, but most of them don\'t know how our day is going.
The daily report is writing everything for the whole day.
And I evaluate the quality of the work what I did and I make comment or review about it.
In addition, before starting the day, I write the To-do list.
In the night before going to bed, I write about the thankful points and reflect things.
Finally, I write a diary and sometimes new ideas.
I started this work from three weeks before.
Interestingly, I am wasting time on SNS and Youtube than I expected.
Even I still spend time on SNS and Youtube, but the time is decreased.
Above all, I know my time flow how my day passes and what I did on the day.
It makes me feel self-confidence and make a new goal for my life.
I will keep this work and I want to change myself for better.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Nice homework! Thank you for sharing! ^ ^ You know what, I have been meaning to do this for the past months now, but, seemingly I just couldn\'t start it. But what your are doing is actually great! I read so many articles on writing about your day and writing about the things you are thankful for. It actually gives you a more positive outlook in life! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Nowadays, I write a daily report every night.
>>CORRECT
I saw it on YouTube.
I saw it on YouTube.
>>CORRECT
Many people are busy, but most of them don\'t know how our day is going.
Many people are busy, but most of them don\'t know how our day is going.
>>Many people are busy, and most of them don\'t even know how their days go.
The daily report is writing everything for the whole day.
The daily report is writing everything for the whole day.
>>The daily report is about writing everything that happened to you in a day.
And I evaluate the quality of the work what I did and I make comment or review about it.
And I evaluate the quality of the work what I did and I make comment or review about it.
>>And I evaluate the quality of my work, what I did and I make a comment or a review about it.
In addition, before starting the day, I write the To-do list.
In addition, before starting the day, I write the To-do list.
>>CORRECT
In the night before going to bed, I write about the thankful points and reflect things.
In the night before going to bed, I write about the thankful points and reflect things.
>>At night, before going to bed, I write the things I\'m thankful about and reflect on things.
Finally, I write a diary and sometimes new ideas.
Finally, I write a diary and sometimes new ideas.
>>CORRECT
I started this work from three weeks before.
I started this work from three weeks before.
>>I started this habit three weeks ago.
Interestingly, I am wasting time on SNS and Youtube than I expected.
Interestingly, I am wasting time on SNS and Youtube than I expected.
>>Interestingly, I figured out that I spend and waste most of my time on SNS and YouTube.
Even I still spend time on SNS and Youtube, but the time is decreased.
Even I still spend time on SNS and Youtube, but the time is decreased.
>>But these days, even if I spend time on SNS and YouTube, the time spent has decreased.
Above all, I know my time flow how my day passes and what I did on the day.
Above all, I know my time flow how my day passes and what I did on the day.
>>Above all, I know how my time and day went.
It makes me feel self-confidence and make a new goal for my life.
It makes me feel self-confidence and make a new goal for my life.
>>It makes me feel self-confident and it gives me a new goal for my life.
I will keep this work and I want to change myself for better.
I will keep this work and I want to change myself for better.
>>I will keep this work and I want to change/improve myself better.
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