11.27Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello! Happy Wednesday to you! ^.^
Thank you so much also for trying to heed my advice.
I love it when you\'re giving importance to it and, oh! I\'m so sorry if
you\'re receiving my corrections late. Don\'t you worry, I\'ll do my best to finish it earlier next time. ^.^
~t. KELLY~
Hi there! Thank you for your long advice.
>>Correct!
I\'ll remember it and I will do my best.
>>Correct!
Homework
Do you like to meet new people or do you prefer to hang out with people you already know?
I like to meet new people and that is one of my job.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I like meeting new people. It\'s part of my job.
In the past time,I was passive guy.
>> In the past, I was a passive guy.
>> OR: Before, I was a passive type of guy.
Taking on sales department at my work,I was changed aggressive man.
>> Being in charge at the sales department, I was changed into an aggressive type of man.
I often hang out with my friends.
>> Correct!
I like hiking,fishing,play golf and drinking with them.
>> I love hiking, fishing, playing golf and drinking with them.
I am a popular guy among my friends.but I don\'t have enough time, because I have to study English.
>> I am the most popular among my friends but I don\'t have enough time to be with them because I have to study English.
It is very difficult.
>> Correct!
It really killing me.
>> It\'s really killing me.
>> OR: It really kills me.
What\'s matter with you?
>> What\'s the matter with you?
>> OR: What\'s wrong with you?
Your correction is so late today.
>> Correct!
I hope your everything is okay.
>> I hope everything is okay.
>> OR: I hope everything is okay with you.
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