11.28

2014-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Finally,It's the last class of this month. Many thanks for your efforts. Let's take a viblant December together. Describe a teacher who has greatly influenced you in your edcation? I still respect a teacher who has tautht me "History" in my high school. He has greatly influenced me in my life goal. I remember that he was such a man of foresight.he gave me an advice to got a major related chef,but I didn't.Sometimes I regret my decision that I didn't listen to his advice.But I am okay. I can challenge to be a chef after retirement. Have a wonderful weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]!

Thank you for the great month that we had in studying English! Thank you for your patience in learning. Keep up the good work. Take care!

~Kelly^^

Hi Kelly! 

>> Correct.

Finally, It\'s the last class of this month.

>> Finally, it\'s the last class for this month.

Many thanks for your efforts.

>> Correct.
Let\'s take a viblant December together.
>>
Let\'s have a vibrant December together.
Describe a teacher who has greatly influenced you in your edcation?
I still respect a teacher who has tautht me \"History\" in my high school.

>> I still respect the teacher who has tautht me \"History\" in high school.

He has greatly influenced me in my life goal.

>> Correct.

>> or: He has greatly influenced me in achieving my life goal.

I remember that he was such a man of foresight.

>> Correct.

he gave me an advice to got a major related chef,but I didn\'t.

>> He gave me an advice to get a major related to becoming a chef but I did not follow him.

Sometimes I regret my decision that I didn\'t listen to his advice.But I am okay.

>> Correct.

I can challenge to be a chef after retirement.

>> I challenge myself to become a chef after retirement.
 Have a wonderful weekend!

>> Correct.

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