11.28
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for the great month that we had in studying English! Thank you for your patience in learning. Keep up the good work. Take care!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly!
>> Correct.
Finally, It\'s the last class of this month.
>> Finally, it\'s the last class for this month.
Many thanks for your efforts.
>> Correct.
Let\'s take a viblant December together.
>> Let\'s have a vibrant December together.
Describe a teacher who has greatly influenced you in your edcation?
I still respect a teacher who has tautht me \"History\" in my high school.
>> I still respect the teacher who has tautht me \"History\" in high school.
He has greatly influenced me in my life goal.
>> Correct.
>> or: He has greatly influenced me in achieving my life goal.
I remember that he was such a man of foresight.
>> Correct.
he gave me an advice to got a major related chef,but I didn\'t.
>> He gave me an advice to get a major related to becoming a chef but I did not follow him.
Sometimes I regret my decision that I didn\'t listen to his advice.But I am okay.
>> Correct.
I can challenge to be a chef after retirement.
>> I challenge myself to become a chef after retirement.
Have a wonderful weekend!
>> Correct.
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