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Hello [이름]!

Thank you for accomplishing another homework! I appreciate your time and effort in making the composition despite your busy schedule. Keep it up! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

1. I think too much editing using Photoshop can ruin a picture.
>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>Too much editing using Photoshop can ruin the natural beauty of a picture.
2. In my opinion, Photoshop should be only used to eliminate disadvantages.
>>>In my opinion, Photoshop should be only used to eliminate imperfections. 
3. I feel happiness when I took wonderful picture of scene that I saw, some people do not.
>>>I feel happiness when I take wonderful pictures of sceneries that I see, some people do not. 
4. For example, they are changing cloudy skys to sunny sky or sky that full or stars using Photoshop.
>>>For example, they change a picture of a cloudy sky to a sunny sky or sky that is full of stars using Photoshop. 
5. I think that making fake things in editing using Photoshop is ruining picture.

>>>I think that fake additions when editing using Photoshop ruins a picture.