11/28 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for catching up with your homework! You know what they say; \"better late than never\"! ^ ^ A fantasy novel beyond \"Harry Potter\". I like the idea! It would indeed require an incredible imagination but I guess, we all have that child in us. And considering that you are very smart, I think you can write a novel! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

I love \"Harry potter\" fantasy novel.

>>Correct
Nowadays, self-development book is very famous in Korea.

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I think it\'s cause by the difficulty to live in modern society.

>>I think it is caused by the difficulty of life in the modern society. 
Global economy is almost always bad, and it makes many unemployed people.

>>Global economy is almost always bad, and it generates a big number of unemployment.
So, many people want to be stronger to survive in this jungle.

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But, I think sometimes it is too synical.

>>But, I think sometimes it is too cynical. (correct, misspelled cynical)
When I read \"Harry potter\", I can just imagine the magical world and I don\'t think about the actual concern.

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I think it can be consolation to modern busy people.

>>I think it could be a consolation to modern and busy people.
So, If I have a chance to write a book, I would write the fantasy noble beyond \"Harry potter\".

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But, I know it requires incredible imagination.

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I became already adult.

>>I am already an adult.