11/28 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Do you think it is an insult to use the expressions “throws like a girl,” “runs like a girl,” or “hits like a girl?”]
When I was a high school student, I thought It was not so wrong.
It means it was quite natural in Korean culture.
I believe the phrase \'Right in the past, but wrong now\'.
The opposite is also true.
Now if someone says \'man like a girl\' or \'woman like a man\', it could be sexual harassment.
Those are really stupid expressions.
Now I think we should look at a person as a just person, not male or female.
The characteristics of people are so various, it is not the reason for the distinction of sex.
Sometimes I don\'t know it there can be gender equality.
I know that finding the perfect standard of equality is difficult.
However, we have to perceive and make an effort to find equality, even it is not the distinction of sex.
There are many discriminations in the world such as race, handicapped person, and so on.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
It\'s true. It was used to be just normal and natural to say these things in the past. But times have changed. We really have to be more aware of gender equality and be cautious of discrimination. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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It means it was quite natural in Korean culture.
It means it was quite natural in Korean culture.
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I believe the phrase \'Right in the past, but wrong now\'.
I believe the phrase \'Right in the past, but wrong now\'.
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The opposite is also true.
The opposite is also true.
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Now if someone says \'man like a girl\' or \'woman like a man\', it could be sexual harassment.
Now if someone says \'man like a girl\' or \'woman like a man\', it could be sexual harassment.
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Those are really stupid expressions.
Those are really stupid expressions.
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Now I think we should look at a person as a just person, not male or female.
Now I think we should look at a person as a just person, not male or female.
>>Now I think we should look at a person with no biases or prejudice.
The characteristics of people are so various, it is not the reason for the distinction of sex.
The characteristics of people are so various, it is not the reason for the distinction of sex.
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Sometimes I don\'t know it there can be gender equality.
Sometimes I don\'t know it there can be gender equality.
>>Sometimes I don\'t know if there will ever be gender equality.
I know that finding the perfect standard of equality is difficult.
I know that finding the perfect standard of equality is difficult.
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However, we have to perceive and make an effort to find equality, even it is not the distinction of sex.
However, we have to perceive and make an effort to find equality, even it is not the distinction of sex.
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There are many discriminations in the world such as race, handicapped person, and so on.
There are many discriminations in the world such as race, handicapped person, and so on.
>>There are many kinds of discrimination in the world such as race, handicapped person, and so on.
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