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2013-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning Today is burning friday that we are looking forward to. Have a nice weekend! Homework What takes up most of your time? I am a heavy sleeper than other people,especially in winter. So, I always don't have enough time. Starting to know power English,my available times became longer than before.I usually spend time at work in weekdays. In case of weeend,I enjoy my spare time with watching TV,play golf,mediation and studying English.I am just satisfied with them. Thank you!

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Hello ther Mr. [이름]! You submitted your homework early today so I really have to finish it early also. Thank you for sharing your other weekend activities. You really have a hectic schedule but I\'m happy because you always include your English study in your set of activities. Anywya, just go over my corrections if you have time. Have a blast this weekend. ~t. KELLY~ Hi there! >> Correct.Good morningToday is burning friday that we are looking forward to. >> Today is burning Friday, the day that we are looking forward to.Have a nice weekend!>> Correct.HomeworkI am a heavy sleeper than other people, especially in winter. >> I am a heavy sleeper compared to other people, especially in winter.So, I always don\'t have enough time. >> So I don\'t always have enough time. As I know power English, my available times became longer than before. >> Do you mean: Since I started at Power English, my available/free time became longer than before. I usually spend time at work in weekdays. >> I usually spend time at work on weekdays.In case of weeend,I enjoy my spare time with watching TV,play golf,mediation and studying English. >> On weekends, I enjoy my spare time watching TV, playing golf, meditating and studying English. I am just satisfied with them.>> I am satisfied doing those things.Thank you! >> Correct.

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