11/29 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s difficult for me to decide what to eat.
Whenever I eat out for dinner, I hesitate to decide what to eat.
There are so many restaurants and menu and I want to taste all the food, so it\'s hard to choose one of restaurant and a menu.
If I eat out with my friends, I used to depend on my friend` decision.
I\'m not picky about food, so any food that is delicious is satisfactory to me.
Also, it\'s good to read reviews about the restaurant from onlines.
If I choose the restaurant over 4.5 out of 5.0 points, most of the restaurants give me satisfaction.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Dr. [이름]!
Most people cannot easily decide where to eat. Thus, the mall made a variety of choices for our mood and taste. As we age, we want to make healthier choices of food. However, mostly, we want to eat scrumptious food. Then, I hope you can decide well for your meals today.
Below, I made some grammar suggestions and they are very few compared to what you sent me yesterday. I am so grateful for your time in making this composition even when you are busy. Keep it up!
See you in class for 20 minutes!
Have a very good afternoon!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Whenever I eat out for dinner, I hesitate to decide what to eat.
Whenever I eat out for dinner, I hesitate to decide what to eat.
>> Correct!
There are so many restaurants and menu and I want to taste all the food, so it\'s hard to choose one of restaurant and a menu.
>> There are so many restaurants and menu and I want to taste all the food, so it\'s hard to choose one of the restaurants and a menu.
If I eat out with my friends, I used to depend on my friend` decision.
>> If I eat out with my friends, I used to depend on my friend`s decision.
I\'m not picky about food, so any food that is delicious is satisfactory to me.
>> Correct!
Also, it\'s good to read reviews about the restaurant from onlines.
>> Also, it\'s good to read reviews about the restaurant online.
If I choose the restaurant over 4.5 out of 5.0 points, most of the restaurants give me satisfaction.
>> Correct!
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