11. 29 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 8.
Question: Describe the appearance of the person you would like to date?
Of course, I like a handsome guy. Who do you like a ugly guy? I want to date with the person who is taller than me and don't have a double eyelid and has a clean skin. Also, I hate dirty people so I hope he doesn't smoke and is clean and smells good. Also, I hope he is not so fat or not so thin and not so muscular and has a normal body. Oh, this is my boyfriend! But, I know the appearance is not all to date or marry. I think marrying is the most difficult choice in our life.
강사 첨삭
Hello hello, [이름]!!:)
How are you doing this Thursday?
I hope that you are doing well.
I like someone who is handsome too but muscular!!^_^
Very good in doing your homework.
I will see you tomorrow.
~ T. Lorna^-^
>> Correct!
Who do you like a ugly guy?
>> Who do you like, an ugly guy?
I want to date with the person who is taller than me and don\'t have a double eyelid and has a clean skin.
>> I want to date a person who is taller than me, a person who doesn\'t have a double eyelid and has a clean skin.
Also, I hate dirty people so I hope he doesn\'t smoke and is clean and smells good.
>> I also don\'t like dirty people so I like someone who doesn\'t smoke, someone clean and smells good.
Also, I hope he is not so fat or not so thin and not so muscular and has a normal body.
>> Moreover, I like a man who is not so fat, not so thin and muscular but rather has a normal body figure.
Oh, this is my boyfriend!
>> Correct!
But, I know the appearance is not all to date or marry.
>> However, the appearance is not just the things that we should consider when choosing someone to marry.
I think marrying is the most difficult choice in our life.
>> I think choosing someone to marry is the most difficult thing to do in our life.
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