11/29 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Who is your favorite superhero and why?
<My answer>
My favorite super hero is Iron Man.
Because, he can fly.
Second, his suit is awsome.
Finally, he can do manything with his suit.
So, my favorite super hero is Iron Man.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing your ideas about this topic. :)
I was always curious about who is your favorite super hero. :D
See you! ^^
Teacher Glenda
Who is your favorite superhero and why?
< My answer>
My favorite super hero is Iron Man.
>> Correct
Because, he can fly.
>>Correct
or
>>> I like him because he can fly.
Second, his suit is awsome.
>> awesome
Finally, he can do manything with his suit.
>> Correct
or
>> Lastly, he can do anything with his suit.
So, my favorite super hero is Iron Man.
>> Correct
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