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It is very scared.
I think it is very related to AI (Artificial Intelligence).
The physical ability of humans is very poor than animals.
We don\'t have a faster running skill, strong teeth, and skin.
If we fight with an animal, I am sure we will lose and be eaten up from them.
However, human has a smart brain and we can use a tool.
It is only one reason to survive and coexist with animals in this world.
But, AI is absolutely different from animals.
Human creates AI, but they can study and revise the program themselves.
I heard that If we will succeed to create perfect AI, it can master humans history and technology in only a week.
It means that it will become smarter rapidly than human and will do work what we can not imagine now.
I don\'t know we can control it or not.
But, I know that it is very dangerous and we should be cautious about the development of that.
We can not stop to be the fourth industrial revolution, but we have to find a proper way to coexist with them.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending time in doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts here. Sometimes we really can not understand the nature of humans. I wonder why they would build something that could even eradicate our existence if it runs out of control. Just like the atomic bomb. It\'s destructible and it\'s effects are unimaginable. But you are right! We may create something advance but we hope we still have the upper hand.
It is very scared.
>>It is very scary.
I think it is very related to AI (Artificial Intelligence).
I think it is very related to AI (Artificial Intelligence).
>>CORRECT
The physical ability of humans is very poor than animals.
The physical ability of humans is very poor than animals.
>>The physical abilities of humans is nothing compared to animals.
We don\'t have a faster running skill, strong teeth, and skin.
We don\'t have a faster running skill, strong teeth, and skin.
>>We can\'t run as fast as them, we don\'t have strong teeth and thick skin.
If we fight with an animal, I am sure we will lose and be eaten up from them.
If we fight with an animal, I am sure we will lose and be eaten up from them.
>>If we fight with an animal, I am sure we will lose and be eaten up.
However, human has a smart brain and we can use a tool.
However, human has a smart brain and we can use a tool.
>>However, humans have smart brains with which we use as tools.
It is only one reason to survive and coexist with animals in this world.
It is only one reason to survive and coexist with animals in this world.
>>CORRECT
But, AI is absolutely different from animals.
But, AI is absolutely different from animals.
>>CORRECT
Human creates AI, but they can study and revise the program themselves.
Human creates AI, but they can study and revise the program themselves.
>>Humans create AI which they can study and revise the program themselves.
I heard that If we will succeed to create perfect AI, it can master humans history and technology in only a week.
I heard that If we will succeed to create perfect AI, it can master humans history and technology in only a week.
>>I heard that if we will succeed in creating a perfect AI, it can master human\'s history and technology in only a week.
It means that it will become smarter rapidly than human and will do work what we can not imagine now.
It means that it will become smarter rapidly than human and will do work what we can not imagine now.
>>It means that it will become rapidly smarter than humans and can be able to do work only we can imagine.
I don\'t know we can control it or not.
I don\'t know we can control it or not.
>>I don\'t know if we can control it or not.
But, I know that it is very dangerous and we should be cautious about the development of that.
But, I know that it is very dangerous and we should be cautious about the development of that.
>>CORRECT
We can not stop to be the fourth industrial revolution, but we have to find a proper way to coexist with them.
We can not stop to be the fourth industrial revolution, but we have to find a proper way to coexist with them.
>>CORRECT
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