11.29 HW) There is prior problem before answer the question!
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Sorry for late submission! :(
When I was elementary school student, the boys got angry when someone said “throws like a girl,” “runs like a girl,” or “hits like a girl” to them. I think we had a criteria deciding the gender by attitude. However, I think we should think about the meaning of \"womanish\" of \"mannish\". The majority of people in the past thought that the woman has to be polite and smile regardless of the situation. On the other hand, the man had been forced to endure their stress, and not allowed to cry, because the stereotype of man\'s duty was being strong leader to family. In these days, the criteria of attitude becomes vague. We can see often the man who do house chores rather than work at office. As this changing, the \"runs like a girl\" is not a insult to anyone.
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Hi Suji! Thank you for devoting a little of your time with your homework. No worries, you know what they say; \"better late than never!\" ^ ^
I appreciate your thoughts here too. You made a good point. ^ ^ Keep it up! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
I think we had a criteria deciding the gender by attitude.
>>I think we have set up a criteria when it comes to genders. (I hope this is what you meant. ^ ^)
However, I think we should think about the meaning of \"womanish\" of \"mannish\".
>>However, I think we should seriously consider the meanings of \"womanish\" and \"mannish\".
The majority of people in the past thought that the woman has to be polite and smile regardless of the situation.
>>The majority of people in the past thought women have to be polite and to smile regardless of the situation.
On the other hand, the man had been forced to endure their stress, and not allowed to cry, because the stereotype of man\'s duty was being strong leader to family.
>>On the other hand, men have been forced to endure their stress, and not allowed to cry, because the stereotype of man\'s duty was to be strong as the head of the family.
In these days, the criteria of attitude becomes vague.
>>In these days, the criteria of gender differences have became vague.
We can see often the man who do house chores rather than work at office.
>>We can often see men doing household chores than working in the office.
As this changing, the \"runs like a girl\" is not a insult to anyone.
>>As this has changed, the \"runs like a girl\" statement is no longer considered as an insult to anyone.
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