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2013-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! It is second proposition today. I'm a little busy for this. Homework Is there beauty in everything we see and do? Yes,I think so. That is for sure. Life is really beautiful.How beautiful things we having now.I think the most beautiful thing is mother's love.My mother passed away about ten years ago. I loved her very much.She gave me a big love.I miss her badly now.Everything is beautiful and I always thank God all of them are healthy and happy. Thank you so much!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]. I enjoyed reading your composition. We are really lucky and blessed to have beautiful people around us. And I agree with you that a mother\'s love is the most beautiful thing that we can feel and experience. Anyway let us always appreciate every little thing that we have around us but most especially the people who care for us. ~t. KELLY~ Hi there! >> Correct. It is second proposition today. >> It\'s my second composition today. I\'m a little busy for this.>> Did you mean: I became busy because of this.HomeworkIs there beauty in everything we see and do?Yes, I think so. >> Correct. That is for sure. >> Correct.Life is really beautiful. >> Correct. How beautiful things we having now. >> How beautiful are the things we have now. I think the most beautiful thing is mother\'s love. >> Correct. My mother passed away about ten years ago. >> Correct. I loved her very much. >> Correct. She gave me a big love. >> Correct. I miss her badly now. >> Correct. Everything is beautiful and I always thank God all of them are healthy and happy.>> Correct.Thank you so much! >> Correct.

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