11/30 homework
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Q:Some people think that companies as and private individuals should pay to clean up the pollution that they produce not the goverment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A: I think making pollution is also indivisuali\'s choice. Some people try to reduce for waste, but it\'s truly some or few.
If goverment is responsilbe for evrething, it comeback to us more cost.(ex.Tax)
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Hi Ms. [Name]~! ^^ Thank you for expressing your mind. I see that you are always trying to do your best in expressing your ideas and thoughts. Please keep speaking your mind.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A: I think making pollution is also an individual\'s choice.
>>> CORRECT
Some people try to reduce waste, but it\'s truly some or only a few.
>>> CORRECT
If goverment is responsilbe for everything, it comeback to us more cost.(ex.Tax)
If goverment is responsilbe for everything, it comeback to us more cost.(ex.Tax)
>>> If the goverment is responsible for everything, it will come back to us costly. (ex.Tax)
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