11/30 Homework

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Although, don\'t forget the rule wherein you cannot start a sentence with the words \"but\", \"because\" as well as \"and\". Observe correct capitalization rules as well.

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All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==

There are many ways to earn money in my age. For example, having an own business, being an employee for a company or government officer, and investments. I think, people in my age have many chances to try various ways to earn money. But, even if we have the many chances, it is very difficult to try, because Not only, we don’t have much money for investment and we don’t have many experiences in business filed but also economy situation in these days is quite bad. So, I think people in my age usually want to get a permanent position in a big company or be a government officer because it is stable and high salary.

>> There are so many ways in which a person my age can earn money. For example, owning a business, being an employee for a private company or for the government as well as investing. I think people my age have many opportunities to earn money in various ways but even if this is so, it is very difficult to be able to because of not having enough capital to invest, lacking experience in the business field and besides that, the economic situation nowadays is not desirable. These are just some reasons why people my age usually opt to get a permanent position in a fortune 500 company or work for the government because these jobs are stable and the pay is good.

 PS. I’m sorry for put the class off out of the blue. Because there was and is a business thing i have to do... See you Next Wednesday!

>> PS. I\'m sorry for putting the class on hold out of the blue because there was and is a business matter that I have to attend to. I\'ll see you next Wednesday!