11.4 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Are you enjoying a good time this evening? I hope this homework doesn't inconvenience you.It's so late.
Do you think all celebraties are talented?
No. I don't think so. Of course, most of celebraties are talented, but some of them succeed by their efforts. To tell the truth,they are one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspriration I guess.
Good bye ma'am!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in. Please check my corrections. Have a nice day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Are you enjoying a good time this evening?
>> Correct.
I hope this homework doesn\'t inconvenience you.
>> I hope that this homework doesn\'t make you feel irritated.
It\'s so late.
>> Correct.Do you think all celebraties are talented?No. I don\'t think so.
>> Correct.
Of course, most of celebraties are talented, but some of them succeed by their efforts.
>> Of course, most of celebraties are talented, but some of them succeeded by their efforts.
To tell the truth,they are one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspriration I guess.
>> To tell you the truth, they are one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspriration, I guess.
Good bye ma\'am!
>> Correct.
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