11.4 Homework

2014-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Are you enjoying a good time this evening? I hope this homework doesn't inconvenience you.It's so late. Do you think all celebraties are talented? No. I don't think so. Of course, most of celebraties are talented, but some of them succeed by their efforts. To tell the truth,they are one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspriration I guess. Good bye ma'am!

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Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. Please check my corrections. Have a nice day! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Are you enjoying a good time this evening? >> Correct. I hope this homework doesn\'t inconvenience you. >> I hope that this homework doesn\'t make you feel irritated. It\'s so late. >> Correct.Do you think all celebraties are talented?No. I don\'t think so. >> Correct. Of course, most of celebraties are talented, but some of them succeed by their efforts. >> Of course, most of celebraties are talented, but some of them succeeded by their efforts. To tell the truth,they are one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspriration I guess. >> To tell you the truth, they are one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspriration, I guess. Good bye ma\'am! >> Correct.

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