11.5 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Having a family like yours is indeed priceless. You are lucky! Anyway, thank you for today\'s homework Sir.
~t. KELLY~
Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
Homework
Write about your greatest accomplishment in life.
It is so difficult thing, even though to explain in korean.
>> It is difficult to explain even in Korean language.
I have a good son and a charming daughter.
>> Correct.
I think it is the greatest accomplishment in my life and It is success that living a normal life.
>> I think it is the greatest accomplishment in my life and It is great to live a normal life.
I\'m 56 years old. I\'m still current at work.
>> Correct. I\'m still working.
I\'m healthy now.
>> Correct.
I study hard everything.
>> I study very hard.
I\'m very happy now.
>> Correct.
I guess, that is one of the greatest accomplishment in my life.
>> I guess, that is one of the greatest accomplishments in my life.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
bye!
>> Correct.
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