11.5 Homework

2013-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good afternoon! Homework Write about your greatest accomplishment in life. It is so difficult thing, even though to explain in korean. I have a good son and a charming daughter.I think it is the greatest accomplishment in my life and It is success that living a normal life. I'm 56 years old. I'm still current at work. I'm healty now.I study hard everything. I'm very happy now. I guess, that is one of the greatest accomplishment in my life. Thank you! Bye bye!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Having a family like yours is indeed priceless. You are lucky! Anyway, thank you for today\'s homework Sir.

~t. KELLY~

Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
Homework
Write about your greatest accomplishment in life.
It is so difficult thing, even though to explain in korean.

>> It is difficult to explain even in Korean language.
I have a good son and a charming daughter.

>> Correct.

I think it is the greatest accomplishment in my life and It is success that living a normal life.
>> I think it is the greatest accomplishment in my life and It is great to live a normal life.

I\'m 56 years old. I\'m still current at work.

>> Correct. I\'m still working.

I\'m healthy now.

>> Correct.

I study hard everything.

>> I study very hard.

I\'m very happy now.

>> Correct.
I guess, that is one of the greatest accomplishment in my life.
>> I guess, that is one of the greatest accomplishments in my life.
Thank you!

>> Correct.
 bye!

>> Correct.

 

 

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