11/5 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for devoting your time in doing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^

You gave a very good thought about this homework. Women\'s\' discrimination throughout the world remains a scourge. Even in countries where women have obtained equality in law, discrimination continues in practice. It would be very nice if women would have equal rights as men and that everyone should do their best to make it happen. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

>>This is a very sensitive issue in our society. 
Actually I think \'yes\', but many men dislike about this social system.

>>Actually I think \'yes\', but many men would disagree with this kind of social system.
Now most high grade jobs occupied by men this is true.

>>Now most high grade jobs are occupied by men, this is true.
We call this is \'glass barrier\' to women.

>>We call it \'glass barrier\' or \'glass ceiling\'.
We don\'t have no barrier officially, but, we actually have it unofficially.

>>We don\'t have \"glass barrier\" officially, but, we actually have it unofficially.
 After few years, if the ratio of men and women in the various job will be equal, the government system will be not required anymore.

>> A few years from now, if the ratio of men and women in various jobs will be equal, some government policies restricting women to advance in their career will no longer be required. 
But, I think women need the government help at least now.

>>Correct