11.6 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow!
Congratulations on your birthday! Happy birthday to you!
I hope you are more healty and have a good luck.enjoy your celebrations.
Today's Homework.
What is the one gadget that you could not live without? why?
I think these are navigation and smart phone.
Natually, I am bad with directions. If It were not nevigation,I could not find the way anywhere. Phone? It is very useful for me. Anywhere I can call everyone.
If it were not for above two gadget,I couldn't live anymore.
These are so convenient for me.
I remember your advice, and I'll do that steadily.
Thank you!
See you tomorrow!
Bye bye!
강사 첨삭
Good Morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for remembering my birthday! It\'s very sweet! Anyway, I read correct sentences today. So, two thumbs-up for you Sir! Keep it up! Thank you for following mg advice. Have a fantastic day!
~t. KELLY~
Wow!
>> CORRECT!Congratulations on your birthday! Happy birthday to you!
>> CORRECT!I hope you are more healty and have a good luck.
>> I hope you will be more healhty and have a good luck!
enjoy your celebrations.>> Enjoy your celebration.
>> OR: Enjoy your party!Today\'s Homework.What is the one gadget that you could not live without? why?I think these are navigation and smart phone.
>> CORRECT!Natually, I am bad with directions.
>> CORRECT!
If It were not nevigation,I could not find the way anywhere.
>> Without the use of navigation, I would not be able to find a specific location.
Phone? It is very useful for me. Anywhere I can call everyone.
>> CORRECT!If it were not for above two gadget,I couldn\'t live anymore.
>> Without these two gadgets, I wouldn\'t be able to survive.These are so convenient for me. >> CORRECT!
>> OR: They are so convenient to use.>> OR: They make everything more convenient.I remember your advice, and I\'ll do that steadily.
>> CORRECT!Thank you!
>> CORRECT!See you tomorrow!
>> CORRECT!Bye bye!
>> CORRECT!
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