11.6 Homework

2013-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Wow! Congratulations on your birthday! Happy birthday to you! I hope you are more healty and have a good luck.enjoy your celebrations. Today's Homework. What is the one gadget that you could not live without? why? I think these are navigation and smart phone. Natually, I am bad with directions. If It were not nevigation,I could not find the way anywhere. Phone? It is very useful for me. Anywhere I can call everyone. If it were not for above two gadget,I couldn't live anymore. These are so convenient for me. I remember your advice, and I'll do that steadily. Thank you! See you tomorrow! Bye bye!

강사 첨삭

Good Morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for remembering my birthday! It\'s very sweet! Anyway, I read correct sentences today. So, two thumbs-up for you Sir!  Keep it up! Thank you for following mg advice. Have a fantastic day! ~t. KELLY~ Wow! >> CORRECT!Congratulations on your birthday! Happy birthday to you! >> CORRECT!I hope you are more healty and have a good luck. >> I hope you will be more healhty and have a good luck! enjoy your celebrations.>> Enjoy your celebration. >> OR: Enjoy your party!Today\'s Homework.What is the one gadget that you could not live without? why?I think these are navigation and smart phone. >> CORRECT!Natually, I am bad with directions. >> CORRECT! If It were not nevigation,I could not find the way anywhere. >> Without the use of navigation, I would not be able to find a specific location. Phone? It is very useful for me. Anywhere I can call everyone. >> CORRECT!If it were not for above two gadget,I couldn\'t live anymore. >> Without these two gadgets, I wouldn\'t be able to survive.These are so convenient for me. >> CORRECT! >> OR: They are so convenient to use.>> OR: They make everything more convenient.I remember your advice, and I\'ll do that steadily. >> CORRECT!Thank you! >> CORRECT!See you tomorrow! >> CORRECT!Bye bye! >> CORRECT!

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